November 4th 2009
Milk Bottle Graph 2 Posted by: Claire
So this is the Blue topped milk graph.
I kinda feel that the graph is too packed.
Please comment on it please.
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Chris Pantling
November 4th 2009
You worked out the spacing =D.
Thought I agree with your own comment that it is a little too packed.
And do it with milk bottle sweets
ashleywhite
November 4th 2009
illustrations are nice, i think u should include a graph key. dont think its clear enough that each milk bottle represents 1cm of left milk. other than that its nice. how many cm’s are in a full bottle of milk? looks like you could make an extra bottle milk out of all the left milk ….. could experiment with that idea… what is the project actully about ?
Claire
November 4th 2009
Its about documenting change.
Keep checking to see if i’ve improved 
My change, so height and weight, but change to things around in my house, so milk measurements, fabric conditioner, my shampoo and stuff like that.
Thank you for your help.
Ben Wood
November 4th 2009
This one is confusing me a little, I think same as my last comment… stick to one size bottle and just chop it for a decimal? You could try doing the graph horizontally rather than vertically so that you can fit them all in one long line rather than lots of lines, which i think makes it look a bit cluttered and a bit unclear. Again, nice illustrations though!
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